Wednesday, October 29, 2014
Compound sentences
Write a short paragraph about your day using at least three compound sentences with correct punctuation :)
Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Our man Steve
1.
Watch....and answer!
What is Steve
Jobs trying to convince his audience of?
2.
Choose ethos, pathos, or logos to focus on
during the speech.
Examples:
3.
As a speaker,
what did Steve Jobs do that was positive?
Monday, October 27, 2014
Example Essay
Read the example essay.
Persuasive
Essay
There is countless social media
that make it possible to form broad connections between people. As users of
social media increase, there is a debate whether social media gives good
influences to people or not. Although social media leads people to have more
interaction and promotes long-distance relationships, it has a lot of
bad things that make us out of control. Many of social media
users are addicted and they became more isolated by using social media. The most famous social
networks, YouTube, Facebook and Skype are included. It is important to know why
people have to use social media carefully and need some restrictions when using
it.
Many people love social media because of its wide connectivity and functions
that people can receive it for free; it does not require money to
make an account and use it. Facebook is the most visible among various social
media. Since each user has a right to accept or refuse the friend request, the
interest by people is high enough. Moreover people tend to allow the other’s friend
request who have same thoughts and characteristics, by this reason it is able
to maintain an intimate relationship. Not only users can leave comment on
other's post and the other user reply to that comment, by doing this continuing
communication can be accomplished. So, it is a same response of users that deep
networking can be made naturally. The survey from the “Telegraph” which is a famous newspaper in United Kingdom, tells
that Social networks such as Facebook are helping to inspire a boom
in long distance relationships. The number of people who have a partner that
lives more than two hours away increased about twice in the last ten years.
Three quarters of them say that by using social network such as Facebook and
MySpace where everything can be shared, they were able to maintain their
long-distance relationship.
These kinds of social media can also have various advantages which
receive less attention than the bad
effects of social media. The most serious problem of social media is addiction.
One reporter described that “Text messaging is no longer the biggest
teenage obsession, and long gone are the days where the biggest worries for parents
were celebrity crushes, massive phone bills from ridiculously long phone calls
and chocolate overloads. These teenage obsessions still exist, but in today’s
day and age, and in comparison to the Facebook craze, they seem rather
insignificant (Director).”
Some
people become lonelier after using social media. Most people might think that
because social media has a benefit that gives more opportunity to people to
have more interactions through social network, people can strengthen
relationship with their friends by chatting and leaving comments on each
other’s wall and even people could make new friends by online meeting. According
to interview with Dr. John Cacioppo, who is a professor in neuroscience at the
University of Chicago, “You can end up online so much that you end up
sacrificing face-to-face contact. Having 4000 friends on Facebook might make
you feel that you have lots of friends, but you have no face-to-face contact.
In that case, loneliness INCREASES (Johnson).” It is not possible
to make real relationship if people do not meet face to face. The people who
were not talkative and social would be worse.
In conclusion, although social
media has lots of benefits that are attractive and helpful to us, it usually
gives more harmful influences. Like an
addiction and fraud advertising, it is not anymore a small problem that can be
ignored. To make better future, it is really important for society to use
social media for to promote positivity.
The future is in the hands of the current generation.
Answer these questions (you do not have to rewrite the question...just number the answers):
1. Choose one type of propaganda, and identify it from the article.
2. What is the topic sentence?
3. How many supporting arguments does this author have to support his point?
Thursday, October 23, 2014
Tuesday, October 21, 2014
Pick a topic
Choose your topic. Write your topic sentence. Do not choose the same topic as someone else.
Monday, October 20, 2014
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